Of Course I'm Out of My Mind - It's Dark and Creepy There
Everywhere I goes, even in my own home, the Party watches me through telescreens.
For I may be a secret memeber of the Brother - the mysterious, legendary group that works to overthrow the Party.
It's gonna be totally awesome,
and usually loose or irregular in measure.
My friends are cooler than giraffes,
And giraffes, they're cool.
But they're making me choke,
And I thought I was broke.
The turning signal revealed my plans,
Now the enemy knows where I am.
They're coming to take me away,
HA - HA.
My favorite # in the alphapbet
Is purple.
Bright as the night,
Powerful as the smallest life.
Molds and fungus,
Spores and pods,
Science of the gods.
Life is short,
Don't lay it down,
I'd rather live the life of a clown.
Sometimes
I
creep
myself
out.
But, of course,
I'm out of my mind.
Who'd wanna be there anyway?
4 comments:
This is kind of strange, but that's the point. This poem is bad in that nothing is connected and nothing makes any sense. A good point for this poem is how the title connects to the end of the poem.
Dear Miss Joanne Kathleen,
Wow. Gross.
Sincerely,
Genevive Louise Noette
Joanne,
This is a pretty confusing poem! but strangely i actually liked it. i really like your line when it says "the party watches me through telescreens" i also like how you made new sentences every few words, it gives the poem character!
This poem was weird. But i liked the end. "But, of course, I'm out of my mind. Who'd wanna be there anyway?" I feel like this is something that a lot of people can relate to. Do we often feel like we are out of our minds, like if someone could hear what we are thinking about they would never talk to us again? I would make a poem about that. Good luck!
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